Happiness is the blood line for life

life is body and soul

once alligned then refined

working all your life isn't a task

but a mask, of how people precieve you

may you recieve wellness, not hate

and succeed at an instantaneous rate.


when life becomes a task 

you aren't suceeding

wake up in the morning

have an objective

do more work on you

This poem is about: 
My family
My community
My country
Our world



I love how your title. It definetly matches the first paragraph FOR SURE! Mentioning the people, body, and soul; relating to the Ancient Greek people. I do wish you good luck on your poem. Every poem I read one after another, I get vibes of inspiration. This poem is phenomenal and should be shared to the World!

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