The Element of You

There's something about the day and the night that's not quite right.

The sun isn't shining as bright and the moon isn't reflecting enough light.

The roses use to bloom. Now their color is a dark gloom.

The ocean used to be blue. But now the water has lost its god given hue.

Could it be that the reason behind why the sun, the moon, the roses

and the ocean have all lost their lustrous hue.

Is because their all missing an important element....

The element of you.

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