Dying Isn't What Hurts

Slipping into unconsciousness,

my breaths turn shallow

and my heart beats softly.

I look at you one last time

before my eyes shut forever.

With my last breath,

my heart stops beating-

yet the only pain I feel-

is the pain of losing you.

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