Don't Hold Your Breath

Life is funny in an ironic way

Hate the one that loves you

Love the one that hates you

Don't

Know what you have 

Till its gone

All in an instant it

Can be gone before you even had a chance to

Hold

it. Gone before you even knew it was there

Like a lost whisper of promise in the wind

Your

One way out gone in a flash

Every hope and any glimmer of chance gone.

But don't forget to take your last

Breath

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