Deeper

He knowsmy troubles and my fears.
Sitting here looking into his eyes i cant tell what he is feeling.
Fear, confidence, protection, love?
I dont know.
"What?" He asks.
He noticed me staring at his eyes.
"What are you feeling?" I say.
"Come again."
"What are you feeling? I cant tell." I say looking deeper in his eyes.
He is quiet.
Then he says, "I love you."
I smile and lay my head on his shoulder.
"I love you, too."

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