Deep Waters

Thu, 05/04/2017 - 13:38 -- DjGamer

She slowly walks out into the rain. Fresh water and the salt of her tears mixing. She feels rejected by everyone. The guy she relied on to numb the pain is gone. She needed him, needed him to take her mind off of love. Because love swam away from her. Left her struggling to keep her head above the waves. Left her gasping for air, but instead of air she only gets water. When love took a swim, it took with it the key...the key to her heart.


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