Tue, 04/03/2018 - 02:09 -- smalls

She's 3 feet deep 

Just below the sea

She's trying to reach the surface 

But it's weighing her down underneath 

She lost hope for eternity 


She's 10 feet deep

Just below the sea

She's seeing things that are make believe

Replacing oxygen with sea 

It's drowning her slowly


She's 20 feet deep

Just below the sea

She lost all her strength trying to rescue thee

She's in too deep 

She cannot see 


Now she's 30,40,50 feet deep.. 


It's intensified 

She realizes she will never be satisfied 

For no matter how much she tries 

Each cry is 




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