a day outside

Fri, 04/18/2014 - 00:09 -- bissyy

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the sun vanishes as we drive towards the night

we get closer and closer to

what we are not looking for

the night is deepinig

but it is bright as the moon shines towards us

we are young and free

without a thought in mind

we finally find our selves

by the oceans shore

we release ourselves for

the peace we deserve has reigned

 

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