Dad

My mentor is my dad because he does not want me to go through what he went through, because he did not have a dad. Sometimes he be like you should be happy you have a dad because some kids don't. I look up to him because he is competitive and I am too and when I get mad losing he be like do you want to play me againm he don't play for real the 2nd game. He's encouraging because he be showing me how to be a man and how to take care of babiesm and not hit girls.

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My family

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