creeping measures

creeping wonders.

Painted sky.

Whisper melodies.

Hear my cry...

 

Swallowed up in shadow measures,

Consumed in pain wrapped in feathers.

The wind that blew with grains of might,

Cast the screams deep down inside.

 

Picture perfect.

Lines undone.

A heart severed...

Yet bursting with love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments

dearprudence

I really like this poem and the way you formatted it. I especially like the line: The wind that blew with grains of might...I thought it was a pretty cool oxymoron

 

Mjay_Emerald

eek! you are officially my new friend. Thank you for your feedback! Any suggestions on my poems? I'm eager for any criticism.

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741