Confused

Location

Confused

With no one to talk to

I'm so confused

How will I vent to hold down the tears

For no one seems to be here

My mind is so dark and weird

With no one to talk to

I'm so confused

Myself I do not express

No ears to even hear the request

Maybe their are but... I shall not confess

With no one to talk to

I'm so confused

The lover says "I love you" is it truely meant deep down

Who knows, for the loved begins to frown

Lover and Loved seem now no so profound

With no to talk to 

I'm so confused

What's after death?

Is it better than breath?

With mine eyes I wish to witness

With no one to talk to

I'm so confused

Obligation is a caustic knife

One shall use it or sucome to strife

Else it be used against life

With no one to talk to 

I'm So Discordantly Confused

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Comments

Ellary Mischel

I like the use of repetition :)

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