"Commercialise" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 5/10/2005

Location

United Kingdom

So ...
Is It Wise To ... " Commercialise " ... ?!?

Just To Get A Short Lived Prize ... ???
Where's It Got Us ... ?
Showing LOVE To YES ... FAKE Thugs ... !?!

RIDICULOUS Cribs To Cars For Pimps ... !!!
Is This The Way We NEED To Live ... ?!?
Sexual SPREES ... PORNOGRAPHY ... !!!
Accompanied By WEAK Hip Hop Beats ... !!!

That's Just ME ...
That's What I SEE ...

I Guess That's NOT ... " REALITY " ... ???

OF COURSE It IS So LISTEN Kids ...
You WON'T Live Long With Guns and Clips ... !!!!!!

When They're ATTACHED To ANGRY Hips ... !!! ...

DON'T RUSH To Kiss Lips Or Hold A Drink ....
USE Your Brain Take Time And THINK ... !!!!!

Money Comes EASY ... !!!
Money Goes ... EASY ... !!!

So MAKE That Cash But DON'T Act FLASH ... !!!
Cos' Nowadays You'll Be AMAZED ...
At How JEALOUSY Can Bring SAD Days ... !!!

Villains Right NOW Are ILLin' and Killin' ... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TRUST Me Now This AIN'T Fulfilling ... !!!

EVERYBODY's Billing But Tell Me Are You Willing ... ?
To STOP Young People Resorting To KILLING ... !!?!!

I'd Rather Be ... " CHILLING " ... !!!
And Use MY BRAIN To KEEP INSTILLING ...
A BETTER Way of Life and LIVING ... !!!

Like ...
GOOD Upbringing By Men and Women ... !!!

This Was THE THING That Kept FULFILLING ...
My Early Life When LOVE Was Something In My SIGHT ... !!!

So Is It WISE To ... COMMERCIALISE ... ???
When This Can Make Some People LIE ... ?!?

... " Eyes ON THE PRIZE ! " ...

But Selfish Guys May Be SURPRISED ... !?!

By What They FIND In Financiers MINDS ... !!!
Let's GO BACK To ... EARLIER Times ...

Cos' Banks In The CITY Have SLAVERY Ties ... !!!

Now THAT's NOT NICE ... !!!
Could You Place A PRICE On A Human Life ... ?!?
How About A Child With ... TEAR FILLED Eyes ... !!?!!

How About YOU What Would You Do ... ?
If Someone BOUGHT How You Could ... "MOVE" ... ???

Well THAT Was THEN And THIS Is NOW ... !!!

"Money Makes The World Go Around !!!"

DON'T ................... IGNORE That ... !!!!!

THAT IS ... " Profound " ...

UNLIKE These Words ... "I Live for Pounds !" ...

Live For LIVING NOT Blood Spilling ... !!!!
Or ... NEEDLESS Killing ... !!!!!

Cos' Things Like THIS Give Lows NOT HIGHS ... !!!

Unlike LOVE From Feminine Thighs ... !!!

I'll End This THERE ...
For MONEY GUYS With VIOLENT Ties ... !!!

Cos I'd Rather Have LOVE And Try To Be WISE ...
Than Live My Life ... To ...

...... " Commercialise " ......

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