Circling The Square

If I give you

today

Will you give up

tomorrow 

 

If I ask

you to wander

Can direction

be saved

 

If I say

that I love you

Will the words

meld the seasons 

 

If I surrender 

this moment

Can forever

— be gone

 

(The New Room: March, 2025)

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