Cinderella Crush

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She walked into my house-party

She was beautiful

amazing

breathtaking

kind

My heart is beating fast

There is music in my ear

And when you smiled at me

I knew I would never be the same

Unfortunately

the girl went home

as suddenly as she came

and I became frantic

-i didn't even get to ask for her name-

so I asked my friends

and friends of friends

and friends of friends of friends

so that I could know who she was

a week later

finally, i found her

on facebook

so I sent her a friend request

she accepted it, and we chatted.

A month later

we're engaged

I lvoe you my Cinderella

This poem is about: 
Me

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