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Sun, 03/02/2014 - 00:45 -- cmency

 Has the world gone mad?

People killing people cause they jealous of the stuff they had.

What’s wrong with you?

Thinking you getting away with a crime

But in due time you will get yours…worse

It’s a not curse that was put you

Should’ve thought about the things you done

Asking yourself is this worth being punished for?

Do someone really deserve to die based on the stupid decisions you made?

When does peace and justice come into play before you do something you will regret?

Being a follower in the world is not what you want to be

Being a leader shows bravery and wise you can be

Can’t you see?

We living in a world where young people killing innocent people

Men killing and raping women because things doesn’t go their way

What happen to men being the provider and the protector?

Being united as one and being happy together.

All this violence has to stop!

Life is too short for us to worry about our lives being at stake

That’s one risk we hate to take.

So let’s all come together as one And feel complete as violence dies away

More action need to be done and less words need to be said.

Comments

sacrifice

Yay :) free verse is the best :D
I can tell your words are raw. It's good. Keep working on your writing! It'll get better and better 

smiles X)

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