'Caust

Thu, 09/04/2014 - 23:01 -- jmmt4
The smoke rises
From the smokestacks
Burning their loads
 
Heads down
We work
Trying to forget
 
Forget the pain
Forget the families
Forget ourselves
 
But still the bluebirds
Are singing
At the smoke's edge

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