A Caterpillar's Luxury

 

Like caterpillars

in between the shadows found

beneath the leaves, words

 

hide out inside a

heavy heart. The carnage in

between the lines keeps

 

souls at bay who soon

will find, this war is not worth

the pain it will bring. 

Comments

namjad

11 years ago

 I can hear nature ooze out of this poem, you are able to evoke imagery using only a few words. That's a great skill to have. I think you'll like the style of William Carlos Williams, he manages to keep his poems sweet and to the point as well.  

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