cant think of a title haha + thanks if anyone reads this :) im hoping to get some feelings out before i forget them

Tue, 03/28/2023 - 03:06 -- ueno33

I think I'm scared of the sun

The sun who is you,

Like every other from the plane of endless stars

The sky you hoped to walk,

Hoped to paint from the moon and back

If only it weren't just me,

Who knew you did

 

The sun, who is you,

The star I've been wishing after

I'm afraid of adoring it

Yet I know the farther I go,

I'll only hold you closer

Before The sky is never in me

 

The sun, which is greater than you,

I'll be the one to hold up the everything it takes

For myself to love that night

One that never ends 

I'll give in before the second time

Only to not be the one to see you again

 

I'll wrap the sun

I'll keep folding

Until everything rips

Until I tear it

but you were the one

that already knew

you already know

you know

just as little

as little as the hope

as we both

be us again

 

 

(if u did, thank u for reading my first poem!!! im to 

tiered today so ill prbly rewrite later T-T)

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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