Brilliant Sun


As the most magnificent,
brilliant, brightness,
I light up the day sky,
like the smile of a child
to his mothers delight.
Shining, glimmering,
like the gleam of the ocean
on a summers day,
reddening pale skin,
like scarlet lipstick,
a solar blanket, covering
and warming all that I envelop.


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