Breathless,Gasping,I need air,

Breathless,

Gasping,

I need air,

I am sinking deeper and deeper,

Help,

But nobody hears me,

Drowning in sadness,

I see a hand,

Strong,

I take it,

I get pulled out,

To see my rescuer was

Him

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