Breathe in, Breathe out

Sat, 10/27/2012 - 16:37 -- xcgirl

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14224-1874
United States
42° 50' 27.762" N, 78° 44' 10.626" W

Breathe in,
Breathe out,

Breathe in,
Breathe out,
“Take two steps back from the line.”

Breathe in,
Breathe out,
“On your mark.”

Breathe in,
Breathe out,

Breathe in…

BANG!

As the sound of the gun ripples through the air,

The race begins.

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