The Boy Through the Looking Glass with a Black Hole for a Soul

The Boy Through the Looking Glass with a Black Hole for a Soul,

is strong as any hardened brass but has no friends to make him whole.

The all consuming abyss that resides inside this boy

takes away all the world’s bliss and saps others of their joy

 

Even though he tries to express, there is no to listen or even willing,

to hear all of his current distress but can anyone even bear all his feelings?

For too long this boy has been alone and much baggage has been amassed

All the pain by himself he must atone, therefore can’t share it and expect others to last.

 

As a result of the black hole, shows testimony to the brokenness

Where there should be a jolly soul, is nothing but a dirty mess.

so do not make any attempt, and try to rescue the boy from his fate

For all you’ll find is torment, and be unable to finish his plate.

 

But honestly why should we give a fuck about warnings.

 

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