blind pt 2

Location

9500
Philippines

i close my eyes

i can still see

the sun

saying my goodbyes

i can still see

the sun

i can’t even cry

i can still see

the sun

i won’t even try

i can still see

the sun

pink fuzz around me

i can still see

the sun

what we could be

 can i still see

the sun?

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