Black eyes

Fri, 07/05/2024 - 16:39 -- Vivin

My black eyes are abyss 

Deep dive into a black hole

Stop and travel time and learn more than ever known before 

Promise to you my black eyes are a journey unexplored 

I’ll give you a story 

I hope you never tell 

Take what was discovered to the grave as gold will lead you through hell 

Wait a century and I’ll give you an eternity 

See your future, my eyes are an obsidian mirror 

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