For the Better

First date we sat in the movies, covered in freight

It was paranormal activity on a dark november night.

 

Next time I saw you mcdonals its was,

it was clear to see this was all puppy love.

 

Next thing I knew we were gazing at the sky,

we confessed "I love you's" that beautiful night.

 

One, two, three months passed by,

celebrating monthaveraries left and right.

 

One, two, three years passed by,

and after 3 years you say goodbye.

 

What do you mean another girl is around?

you still love me right? stop being a clown!

 

And just like that he was gone in the night,

no justification or another fight.

 

If you you love him, let him go whereever,

if he comes back, he will be yours forever,

 

If you feel bad for me, please don't ever,

after you left, my life has been better.

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

Laurajasmine

You made me ask myself why did I stop writing! thank you. 

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