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Recovering by: Luis V
Recovering
I’m on my way to recovery
I’m fixing my broken heart
I’m fixing my life
I’m on my way to recovery
I can see it
I see the light at the end of the tunnel
My dreams are finally coming true
I’ve worked hard for this recovery
And I finally see it paying off
I’m happy that it’s paying off
Finally I have no more thoughts of worrying
I have no more thoughts about Lizzy
I have no more dreams or nightmares about Lizzy
I can finally think about my future
Instead of my past
I can finally move on with my life
I’m on my way to recovery
I can finally think about what will I do after high school
Instead of thinking about Lizzy 24/7
I can finally think about God if I wanted to
I can finally stop thinking about the devil and my former demons
I can finally stop looking over my shoulder
To make sure the grim reaper isn’t around the corner
I can finally stop thinking about my past
I’m recovering
I’m picking up the broken pieces of my heart
I’m picking up the missing puzzle pieces
I’m recovering
I’m happy
I’m no longer sad
So if I recovered from my broken heart
If I recovered from my darkness
If I recovered from my suicidal thoughts
If I recovered from my depression
Than you can too
For anyone who are going through tough times
I’m recovering
OK, so I used to have a crush on this girl in school for 3 months and then it went away and 2 days ago I started getting feelings for her again and yesterday she kissed another guy so when I saw that my heart sunk to the bottom of my stomach and shattered and I was crying in the shower and I cried myself to sleep, it was the worst I haven't felt like this since 7th grade
Yeah, I tried to move on yesterday during church because I forgot about it, but then when my youth leaders wife prayed for me and she started praying for my broken heart, and I started crying because of all the memories and now the girl from yesterday I was like God are you serious I wanted to forget this pain but then you had to remind me. and I couldn't tell my youth leader yesterday he didn't come to church becasue he has a pink eye
Yeah, but it felt like he reminded me I didn't know it was a delieverance prayer because I forgot about it during youth class until she prayed for me, and now I can't stop thinking about it because I saw her this morning and then I have her for 5th period so its going to be hard for me
Yeah, thats true but it felt like she was focused on me because she always all up on me invading my personal bubble, always giving me hugs, etc. so Ireally thought she was the one but now I know I have to move on and I can't let her distract me anymore becasue if I keep letting this get to me I know it's going to bring me back into the world of drugs and alcohol and depression and I don't want that anymore
Yeah, my mom always said that she was a distraction to me but I never listened to her because at first she wasn't and she said just be careful becasue she never distracted and she said that the only reason God did that to me yesterday because in the future she could've possibly led me away from God and I've heard of Jezzebel my mom used to talk about her all the time. And stop on the enemy's neck like Jesus did when he denied the temptations 3 times in the desert
Yeah, I'll try to focus on Jesus the only reason I prayed or read the Bible for so long besides the heartbreaks was because I've been judged by other Christians and I recently got judged by my cousin who is a Christian she judged me for cursing in my poems and it made me mad I told her if she doesn't stop I just don't know if I can be a Christian again after that because it made me upset
Tired by: Luis V
I’m tired of hate
I’m tired of love
I can’t find someone’s shoulder
I need a shoulder to cry on
I need someone to hug
I need someone to be there for me
I’m weak
I’m not strong enough to get through this
I dug my nails into my arms
I’ve cut myself before
Now those thoughts are coming back
Having your heart broken sucks
I just want to move on
I just want to forget
But that memory is just on repeat
Now I just want to smoke again
I miss my heart
There’s a hole in my chest
I need a drink
I’m tired of wasting my time
God why can’t you just take me home now
Why am i suffering with this broken heart
Why is this memory playing on repeat
I’m just a lost soul who needs help
I thought I found the one for me
I thought I found my soulmate
She helped me face my demons
She helped me face my depression
She’s the reason why I stopped cutting
I’m just tired of this broken heart
My life is not the same
This hurt a lot
She always picks me up when I’m done
Because of her I have a purpose
Because of her she makes me feel at home
She makes me feel peace
But now that’s gone
I have to stop wearing my heart on my sleeve
I have to stop showing my emotions
Because I’m done with getting broken hearted
I thought I found a home
God where are you?
I need you
I want you
But it feels like your not there
It feels like I’m talking to myself everytime I pray
My demons are coming back
But I won’t let them back in
I want to pop red pills
So I can see the red letters of jesus speaking
Because I really need you right now
I’m lost
I’m done
Girl I really need you around
You brought meaning to my life
But now my heart is broken
God take this pain away
I hate it
For the past 48 hours
I’ve been crying in the shower
And I’ve been crying myself to sleep
I need you god
I hate this damn pain
Please heal this heart of mine
I hate this
I’m tired I don’t wanna keep crying
I’m just tired
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Ohhh man, I miss Billy graham he's the one that helped me get over Lizzy's suicide, now I listen to Michael Todd and Steven futrick