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Luis Vargas

Recovering by: Luis V

Recovering 

I’m on my way to recovery 

I’m fixing my broken heart

I’m fixing my life

I’m on my way to recovery

I can see it 

I see the light at the end of the tunnel

My dreams are finally coming true 

I’ve worked hard for this recovery 

And I finally see it paying off

I’m happy that it’s paying off

Finally I have no more thoughts of worrying 

I have no more thoughts about Lizzy

I have no more dreams or nightmares about Lizzy

I can finally think about my future 

Instead of my past 

I can finally move on with my life

I’m on my way to recovery 

I can finally think about what will I do after high school

Instead of thinking about Lizzy 24/7

I can finally think about God if I wanted to

I can finally stop thinking about the devil and my former demons

I can finally stop looking over my shoulder

To make sure the grim reaper isn’t around the corner

I can finally stop thinking about my past

I’m recovering

I’m picking up the broken pieces of my heart

I’m picking up the missing puzzle pieces

I’m recovering

I’m happy

I’m no longer sad

So if I recovered from my broken heart

If I recovered from my darkness

If I recovered from my suicidal thoughts

If I recovered from my depression 

Than you can too

For anyone who are going through tough times 

I’m recovering

 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

you are recovering indeed brother

i did a powerful video last night on youtube

check it out

Luis Vargas

OK, I will

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i pray that the video inspires in Jesus Name

Luis Vargas

Morning, I need your advice on something 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

morning

busy here at work

what you need advice about? what's on your mind

Luis Vargas

OK, so I used to have a crush on this girl in  school for 3 months and then it went away and 2 days ago I started getting feelings for her again and yesterday she kissed another guy so when I saw that my heart sunk to the bottom of my stomach and shattered and I was crying in the shower and I cried myself to sleep, it was the worst I haven't felt like this since 7th grade  

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this is my perspective 

focus on getting healed from previous wounds

focus on getting your life in order-graduate high school, advance education, career, etc

focus on getting engage to your church community

to cry your eyes to sleep because the person you liked ends up kissing/liking someone else is not worth the heartache

there are plenty of fishes out in the sea, The Lord will guide to catch the right one (when the time is right)

remember that Jesus is the same yesterday, today, and forever.

focus on the Jesus love He have for you

ask/pray to Him about pouring His love to you

Luis Vargas

Yeah, I tried to move on yesterday during church because I forgot about it, but then when my youth leaders wife prayed for me and she started praying for my broken heart, and I started crying because of all the memories and now the girl from yesterday I was like God are you serious I wanted to forget this pain but then you had to remind me. and I couldn't tell my youth leader yesterday he didn't come to church becasue he has a pink eye 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

that was a prayer of salvation-deliverance of freedom from a heart that's battered , but not broken 

your heart still beats

God is very serious about His plans for you-God is not reminding you of your heartbreak

He is revealing to you that it's time to let go and move on to where your focus point is Him

use your God given ability to persevere and overcome the pain and sorrows

Jeremiah 29:11

for i know the plans i have for you saids the Lord, the plans are good and not disasterous, but a future and hope

Luis Vargas

Yeah, but it felt like he reminded me I didn't know it was a delieverance prayer because I forgot about it during youth class until she prayed for me, and now I can't stop thinking about it because I saw her this morning and then I have her for 5th period so its going to be hard for me 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

it was a prayer of salvation because He knows what you suffered through

salvation is about deliverance from sin, pain, sorrows, hurt, resentment, etc.....

let it go and focus on you brother, focus on school and achievement to graduate high school

why focus on her, she's not focusing on you

know your identity in Christ

Luis Vargas

Yeah, thats true but it felt like she was focused on me because she always all up on me invading my personal bubble, always giving me hugs, etc. so Ireally thought she was the one but now I know I have to move on and I can't let her distract me anymore becasue if I keep letting this get to me I know it's going to bring me back into the world of drugs and alcohol and depression and I don't want that anymore 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

you know who jezebel is in the bible?

she is anti-christ, she is evil, a poisonous venom that will strike if you're not equipped with the armor of God

think back to eve when the serpent deceived her by lying about eating the tree of knowledge

you just gave yourself advice that is the distraction can bring you back to a place of desolation and oppression 

you don't want that anymore so step on the enemy's neck, don't give satan your hand, he'll take your arm

rebuke satan in the name of Jesus Christ

Luis Vargas

Yeah, my mom always said that she was a distraction to me but I never listened to her because at first she wasn't and she said just be careful becasue she never distracted and she said that the only reason God did that to me yesterday because in the future she could've possibly led me away from God and I've heard of Jezzebel my mom used to talk about her all the time. And stop on the enemy's neck like Jesus did when he denied the temptations 3 times in the desert 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

there you go

you know what to do

Jesus laid it all out, it's on you to be obedient and listen to His warnings

focus on Jesus-the one that truly loves you

Luis Vargas

Yeah, I'll try to focus on Jesus the only reason I prayed or read the Bible for so long besides the heartbreaks was because I've been judged by other Christians and I recently got judged by my cousin who is a Christian she judged me for cursing in my poems and it made me mad I told her if she doesn't stop I just don't know if I can be a Christian again after that because it made me upset 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

luke 6:36-37

don't judge for you'll be judge

don't condemn for you'll be condemned

forgive for you'll be forgiven

share that scripture with your cousin, whatever she say afterwards, that's between her and God

 

don't allow even christians to condemn you

being a christian is about relationship with Jesus, and build with those who truly know the word

+ is what Christ represent, the cross

 

a person who is a christian or non-christian should never come in between you and Jesus

being a christian is about relationship with Jesus Christ

Luis Vargas

Tired by: Luis V

I’m tired of hate

I’m tired of love 

I can’t find someone’s shoulder 

I need a shoulder to cry on

I need someone to hug

I need someone to be there for me

I’m weak

I’m not strong enough to get through this 

I dug my nails into my arms 

I’ve cut myself before

Now those thoughts are coming back

Having your heart broken sucks

I just want to move on

I just want to forget

But that memory is just on repeat 

Now I just want to smoke again

I miss my heart 

There’s a hole in my chest 

I need a drink

I’m tired of wasting my time 

God why can’t you just take me home now

Why am i suffering with this broken heart

Why is this memory playing on repeat 

I’m just a lost soul who needs help

I thought I found the one for me 

I thought I found my soulmate

She helped me face my demons 

She helped me face my depression

She’s the reason why I stopped cutting 

I’m just tired of this broken heart

My life is not the same 

This hurt a lot

She always picks me up when I’m done  

Because of her I have a purpose 

Because of her she makes me feel at home

She makes me feel peace 

But now that’s gone 

I have to stop wearing my heart on my sleeve

I have to stop showing my emotions 

Because I’m done with getting broken hearted 

I thought I found a home 

God where are you?

I need you

I want you

But it feels like your not there 

It feels like I’m talking to myself everytime I pray

My demons are coming back

But I won’t let them back in

I want to pop red pills 

So I can see the red letters of jesus speaking 

Because I really need you right now

I’m lost

I’m done 

Girl I really need you around 

You brought meaning to my life 

But now my heart is broken 

God take this pain away

I hate it

For the past 48 hours

I’ve been crying in the shower 

And I’ve been crying myself to sleep

I need you god

I hate this damn pain

Please heal this heart of mine

I hate this 

I’m tired I don’t wanna keep crying 

I’m just tired 

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i know whose shoulders you cry on

cry on God/Jesus shoulders

watch on youtube "youth commit thyself-billy graham"

watch it and be free, let it all go and give it to Jesus

im watching the video right now

Luis Vargas

Ohhh man, I miss Billy graham he's the one that helped me get over Lizzy's suicide, now I listen to Michael Todd and Steven futrick 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

watch the video "youth commit thyself" and be inspired, and be reminded who are you in Christ

it's cool to be different from others, be unafraid to speak the truth of God to anybody; family members & "believers"included because they can get out of line

2 Thessalonians 3:3

"but the Lord is faithful, who will establish you and guard you from the evil one"

Luis Vargas

Proverbs 3:5 

"Trust the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding."

and this quote I found says

"God can heal a broken heart, you just need to give him all the pieces" I might have to do that 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Amen

remember proverbs 3:6

in all your ways, acknowledge Him, and He will direct your path

 

give it ALL to JESUS, don't think about it, just do it

Luis Vargas

Yeah, I know I have to do it but its going to be hard for me to do it because I haven't done that since 6th grade 

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