Being alive is a dream

Being alive is a dream come true

the sun that shines with a warm smile

Greeting everyone like me and you

As its light travels beyond a mile

Seeing people happy and optimistic

Proud and anxious

The feeling is so realistic

as the light removes the nights evil darkness

As the day goes by 

People are interacting with friends they love

to help them thrive

and make them look above 

past the wickedness the world now inherits

and the bad qualities that can be demolished

but the "bright side" is the fact that we can all repair it

and anything that tries to cease us from doing right should be abolished 

Because we are a nation that cares

and respects one another

Isn't that what we want to see there

because we don't have fairy god mothers

What makes me want to get up and dance

is whenever a miracle comes through the door

and I tend to grab it with my light brown hands when I get the chance

to be the first in line because who knows if there will be more 

The ocean mist and summer breeze

lifts me light like a feather

calms me from my curly brown hair to my graceful feet and strong knees

It feels good to have evryone all together

To end is a new beginning

a new sight and loving harmony

not just one but everyone winning

what stisfies them, family, friends and money

This poem is about: 
Me
My community
Our world
Guide that inspired this poem: 

Comments

Anthony.C731

This is one of few poems I have ever written in my life

I think it could use improvement but to me it is the best I have ever written

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