never have I seen a flaming river so clean , When it falls it pars to an extreme . This water falls when your heart screams. , it even falls in your dreams. I call it the obstinate water . certainly when you want it off it gets stronger . It falls when all emotions gather , it Usually rise up and burn the bather . This water is beautiful , yet leaves you feeling miserable . It’s said to be untouchable and when it falls the pains unbearable. It falls in a blink of an eye . no one is able to stop this water not even the tough guy . It’s unstoppable even when luck is by your side . It leaves you feeling dead inside . This water is suicide . It’s the beauty in a cry ,but most importantly it’s demonize . If someone would to name it the death water it would have qualified.
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