Beach Bums

Tattered sandals and baggy jeans
a cardboard sign, three in fact
I look at their smiling faces
how can the homeless be happy?
one of them compliments my eyes
a mumbled thank you and I'm on my way
I envy them

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741