To Be a Better Me

Thu, 06/06/2013 - 22:39 -- corrin


United States
26° 3' 43.6932" N, 80° 22' 37.2" W

Feelings, emotions building up
Words bursting to life as I try to express myself.
Physically pouring my thoughts on paper
Critiquing my own judgments and views.
The chance to improve myself,
The way I think, the way I am.
To vent in a way that doesn't involve
Hurting others due to clouded judgment.
To be a better me.



first poem on poetry :)

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