America's Soldiers

Location

62704
United States
39° 47' 7.4292" N, 89° 40' 19.9812" W

America: Red, White, and Blue.
Soldiers: They've protected me and you.
Someone of whom we should all be proud.
Someone who needs the be heard aloud.
To have certain rights without contest.
Some regret their past, many have professed.
Without a doubt they have passed the test.
Loyal to the Red White and Blue,
America's best.

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marie

I'm loving the conciseness of this poem. I think its length packs a powerful punch. You've almost created a pyramid-like scheme in how you've written this poem, and I think that would make it even more impactful. Please keep writing! I'd love to see more.

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