Amend, Modify, Revise

Tue, 02/25/2014 - 17:47 -- emily_t

You're terrible words pierce through my viens.

The looks I am given bring me down.

I catch myself.

I will not back down.

I live because I am given this life.

Change your evil ways.

Everyone deserves this life.

See the good not the bad.

Be better. Be strong.

Never give up.

You are a winner.

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