Am I Me?

Am i me if my mind set is not the same?
Am i me if I love that special person so much more than i demed possible?
Am i me if my emotions have changed ?
Am i me if my whole world came tumbling down on me and you were the only one there to break my fall?
Am i me if i tell you i love you and mean it and i feel it
Can i possibily be me if i show you i love you
How can i love you so hard, so fast its a mystery all these years i wasted running from what i thought love was
And i ran straight in to you the love of my life so i am still me if i love you im just a new me, a better me for you

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

Though this poem is short and sweet it is very  heartfelt and asks all the questions we would ask when we are falling in love with someone, because not all our loves are accepted, not only by them, but by ourselves sometimes. I would recommend doing a once over, and edit this piece however. There are a few grammatical mistakes and capitalization errors that could easily be fixed. Thank you so much for sending this in, it was great to read!

Becca.

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