"All for Nothing"

"All for Nothing" I swear that I care, but I'm so empty and bare. A lifeless mind that is rare, so all the world stops to stare. It's been awhile since we talked, it's been awhile since we walked, we're watching from the sidelines, our bodies etched out in chalk. The time will soon hit noon, to mark the end of our time, your face the mask of the moon, You'll always be there, but you'l never be mine...

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j_bellivan

First time ever submitting some work ive done, so any positive feedback would be great!

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