Acid Rain

I'm watching through my window
A raw display of power
Needles of lightning in the sky
Thunder screaming through the night

I'm just standing here
Watching through the fear
In the eye of the storm
As the clouds swarm

These cosmic galaxies
All live inside of me
Melting in my mind
Unconstrained by space and time
I make them all collide

The storm comes
Violent and warm
Crossing empty lines
Behind my eyes
I stand in awe
They erase my pain
Now I'm melting In
Acid Rain

Comments

Blood_Rainicorn

11 years ago

why I write does not have to be so black and white, hope people can see what I was going for.

affity

11 years ago

What I got from it was you write about things that have an impact on you such as the fear of a ferocious stormy night. I felt that the storm itself was an inspiration, a reason for you to write. It was clever and different not "I write because" sort of way.

Blood_Rainicorn

11 years ago

Thank you so much, I wasn't sure if anyone would get it. You really made me feel like I did what I set out to do :)

Blood_Rainicorn

11 years ago

why I write

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