Achilles

Fri, 07/05/2024 - 11:17 -- Vivin

Careful,

Hurt so fresh, a forever bleeding wound

Clone yourself, see the beauty untold

Remember your virtue

Try to stop the long forgotton tale, limerence of what once was 

A repetitive tune

Do you hear the breath of those lost?

Crowned, but a knights armor forever ingrained in the weight of bones

Be done with this now,

Can you hear me?

I'm talking to you 

 

Inspired by : Achilles Come Down

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