Above You On A Cloud


Can you see me?
I can see you…
I am floating through my dreams
on a feathery cloud.
You smile, and the cloud
Floats higher and higher.
When you speak to me,
I become closer to the sun,
Still soaring above the ground.
You laugh, and my little cloud
Grows bigger, and warmer,
And I almost burst with
But when you are sad,
And when you ignore me,
My cloud cries softly…
And it rains.


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