Abandoned

I can't believe this

My mind cannot comprehend

How all my dreams have

Just met a terrible end

As the door slams shut

I fall to my knees

The air is tensing up and I

Cannot seem to breathe

I was hoping this wouldn't happen

That you would not find out

All these secrest that I hide are locked

Deep inside my doubt

As I close my eyes

I think of what went wrong

Was it the way I said I love you?

Or did you know all along?

I can't close my eyes

Because all I see is your face

So, I sit like a fool and cry

While you vanish without a trace

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