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I.

A revolution begins within the mind,

Far fom the graveyard trenches and barren battlefields.

It emerges as a thought,

      a single,powrful thought in the citizen's head

Born from the discovery of

     These invisible whips and chains.

 

II.

Once set free, it evolves into a virus.

From patient mouth to wistful ear,

It spreads like the plague.

Refusing to be contained,

It infects people with hidden truths.

Slowly, ignorance fades into dust.

 

III.

The equivalence point:

Here, a revolution is born

Then pauses to savor first breath,

Gathering all the collective minds

In preparation for its quest for justice.

Justice, after all, is what it seeks

In its journey across the weary wastelands.

 

IV.

United they stand yet united they can fall.

Devoid of concern

Are those beckoned by the call.

Ravenously, they battle suited serpents

And break a broken order with their bones

While using its carcass as fuel

To burn their hollow paper thrones.

 
 

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