2009 Sublime Naivety: What Am I Thinking About?

[12/16/09]

What am I thinking about?

Nothing comes to mind,

Obviously I am thinking about something,

But it's too much at one time.

Yet nothing in particular comes from my head,

But the weight on my shoulders

Creates a pull of water I now have to tread.

What am I thinking about?

I wish the answer would come to me now,

But I don't know how.

Is this what I'm thinking about now?

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