2009 Sublime Naivety: Realizing

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36° 17' 33.6336" N, 87° 4' 56.658" W

[2/06/09]

When reality hits,

You don't know what hit you;

To balance checks and pay the bills,

To sacrifice and make some deals,

To be a parent and know how it feels.

 

So much responsibility all at once,

It comes right at you like a punch.

To make a description fast and quick,

How do they do it and don't have a fit?

 

So now I realize even more,

To stay in school and get good scores,

To become my dream and,

Live a good life so I can support my family,

When it's my time.

 

 

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