At an unknown hour the daylight inches timidly through branches like bars set too high. The chill of October has settled here, where shadows dictate and instinct inflates. Anonymity spurs quietude in paradise, where martyrs of the forest need no introduction. The words come and go, like a lithe trespass within the trail-less deep woods. It's sensory~the enigmatic carbon date of California.


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