#1

Just another thought, just another night.
No reason to worry, no reason to fight.
I'm just being selfish,  I'm just being vain. 
There's no point in worrying, it just causes pain. 

Comments

jwiener

11 years ago

I think the rhyme scheme and repetition in this poem is great, and definitely shows how a small poem can pack a big punch.

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