"Aliens!" I shouted above the roar of the blaze.

Please rescue us from this godforsaken place

veritable hellscape, where angels fear ingress.

Just then an unexpected pleasant distraction
woke me from induced stupor linkedin to Los
Angeles fires jump/kick starting telepathic wife
high connection between yours truly husband
to a righteous leftist extraterrestrial establishing
an immediate cove Van Halen brotherly bond.

Here and now would be the time to exercise
opportunistic exchange of communication and
experience unconditional acceptance despite
spindleshanks, which might explain why I beak
came the laughing stock of unrelenting torment

when a student at the school of hard knocks for
knuckleheads, which barely found me earning

a diploma graduating with flying colors - black,
blue, and red, yet interestingly enough the hues

of the home planet where creatures whom yours

truly desperately wanted to be taken to, no matter

I would never get to befriend potential amazingly

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countless bodies out beyond the outer limits of the

twilight zone hiding within dark shadows or maybe

lurking along the edge of night awaited homeboys

to regale me about learning the secret to survive

nothing short of a thermonuclear war, a bajillion

times more horrific than the tragedy that signaled
confluence of meteorological factors wrought,

hellscape in southern California global warming
suspected, nevertheless, who in their grooviest,

and wildest dreams could have thought never

in a millions years Dante's Inferno cruel

fiery fate jump/kick started lapping flames argh.

I read the horrific news from afar (no less than a
bajillion miles from Earth) transfixed watching live

action broadcast from the most sophisticated input

device (unknown to man) finding me rapt (quite an
understatement) and hypnotized fixated on the raft
of burning mansions mega million dollar homes
now chock full of tsuris unbearable unimaginable
unrecognizable fraught nouveau homeless - yes
with money in the bank to seek shelter at a pricey
glitzy accommodation tormented courtesy charred
domiciles gifted into rubble ground hovels searing
casting an everlasting impression upon mine eyes.

Inescapable nightmare reality indelibly etched numb
burrs of retinas burned with ineradicable images see
sinned with unfair indiscriminate scenes grafted in
soot to ash heaps impossible mission to differentiate
though amidst the mounds of mourning dewy eyed
resilience camaraderie witnessed salvation, where
random acts of kindness punctuated disequilibrium
while search and rescue teams combed thru debris
no matter hot embers still smoldered coalescence
generated an eerie orange otherworldly glow like
a quiet riot of Venusian topography where average
surface temperature on said planet around eight
hundred and sixty seven degrees Fahrenheit (464
degrees Celsius), making said solar body the hottest
planet in our solar system due to strong greenhouse
effect caused by its thick carbon dioxide atmosphere
earning evening star appellation qua Earth's "evil twin"
because of its thick atmosphere of carbon dioxide
and sulfuric acid, which chemical cocktail poisonous to life.

 

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