4 Keys One HeartOur heart

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32608
United States
29° 36' 56.4228" N, 82° 21' 57.3012" W

4 Keys One Heart
Our heart is composed of a four chambered valve with blood flowing in and out
In and out
Ideally our heart consists of four secret gardens that can only be unlocked by four different keys
Keys from jaggered blades, to twist and turns, to spiral keys that won’t fit in your house door like regular keys
Keys you can’t find anywhere, but beneath the palms of our soul mate
Palms filled of unscripted linings engraved within the skin
By unraveling one garden he will not seek the superficial scenery of flowers plastered on a painting or the warmed sunlight past the river bank
Instead he will ravel what we try to hide from our everyday life to our everyday people
One secret is revealed 3 left untouched
Four keys leading to Four Gardens unified by the thick cartilage that makes up one Organ
The main Organ
Our Heart!

Comments

samueltfranklin

Comparing the four chambers of the heart to four separate, locked gardens is certainly an interesting, fresh image, and forms the basis of a well-written poem. Keep it up!

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