Comparison

Numbers 20:8 & 11

New English Translation

8 “Take the staff and assemble the community, you and Aaron, your brother, and then speak to the rock before their eyes. It will pour forth its water, and you will bring water out of the rock for them, and so you will give the community and their beasts water to drink.” 11 Then Moses raised his hand, and struck the rock twice with his staff. And water came out abundantly. So the community drank, and their beasts drank too.

 

Comparison

 

Moses spoke rashly through his thoughts and hit the hardened clay

Moses consequently sinned like I seem to do each and every day

Moses did not move the flock unless he spoke to the Lord and prayed

Moses so grew in strength in every way, while I mope and play

 

The Holy Spirit provided him much power almost every day

I ignore the Spirit often and move by what I think and say

Moses gave his life to them who rebelled with many arrays

And I don’t care about the loss that I run into day after day

 

Jan Wienen

This poem is about: 
Me

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