Nangi, please go through this and tell me how is it.

BLOTTED LOVE

Painting brushes
Danced in rhythm
Rainbow colours
Added the music
Picturesque on canvas
Masterpiece, long waited.

Painted in open air
Unnoticed grey clouds
Sky started crying
Pouring down heavy tears.

Blotted and faded
Completely washed off
My water coloured painting
Colourful masterpiece.