Unforgetable

Tue, 07/09/2013 - 22:22 -- lealieu

I only spent one day with you and I've thought about you every day since

It's been three years

 

I see your face on every guy

Quite amusing to see your face with different styles of facial hair

 

I see your eyes in the stars, looking deep into mines, then getting lost in their beauty and inner-self

I hear your laugh day and night, and it's infectious

 

I smell your scent in the breeze, taking it all in with the deepest breath I can

I have found nothing to fit your touch, warmth, and comfort

 

Will we be together again?

 

Comments

missmegansliski

I really like this poem... Especially the end of it.  It really makes me feel deeply inside as I can relate very well. Nice job!

lealieu

Thank you so much!  I didn't think anyone would read it.  I wrote it for myself, and if 1 person feels the same way, I'm happy to show that they're not the only one who feels a certain feeling.  Thank you again.

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