A disappointment

A true disappointment has come today 

I wished for a trip to the sunset  bay

The money it cost was quite a handful 

But I told them that later I could get a truck full

But no was the answer and try as I might

I couldn't get them to make it right

So now I lay here on my bed

No happy thoughts sing in my head 

For a true disappointment has come today

When I wished for a trip to the sunset bay.

This poem is about: 
Me

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