Wow. You poem is amazing. I can definately relate to it because I'm Hispanic so I go through that as well. You're a talented writer. Keep writing some more!

muy bien hermano ! bueno suerte amigo 

What is there to say but that this poem is totally amazing, profound and awesome?

Very we'll written. Love the mix of Spanish and English! Glad you won the scholarship. Keep writing!!

-Mikaila

Congrats!! You definetly  earned this "W". You opened apart of my heart and mind to understand others that may be in your position but not have writing as a gift to communicate with the world.

well written :)

Me gusta mucho

I could feel that one. Especially after I listened to you recite it.

i loved your piece very touching and honest.

I think you are very talented. Very beautiful poem.

I can see why you won, because ours words aren't measured by quantity and quality; but the passion that is granted by our understanding of one another. Yet I could say that my words are the tigger to my pressure and when it releases it exposes my mind's creation. Yet then again I wouldn't really be touching the surface of my understanding, because words are meant to be in the surrounding of others to make a difference; instead of being in somebody's old dusty journal. 

I feel like you spoke for many others, you definitely gave those people who are in the same situation as you, a voice, with these words, i can relate, thank you.  * thumbs up *

Spanish is such an amazing language!! I love how you incorperated it into this poem. There was alot of heart put into it. Keep it up, I want to read more.

Passionate and eloquently worded. Your mind is beautiful and filled with creative links. What you wrote was brilliant. Snaps all around. Great piece.

Beautiful, dude. Well done. Im hispanic too, who has an accent in both English and Spanish alike. This truly expresses the feel of this state.

This truly speaks to me OMG AMAZING im Guatemalan too!

*snaps* to you Harlyn! I really enjoyed your piece, I can definitely relate. You know it's hard sometimes, but we all learn how to handle it and use it to build who we are. :)

You inspired me. You inspire me. You're inspiration. That was so good that writing about it And attempting to express, to CONVEY how good it was. Is almost an injustice. oooh damn, that was so good.

Loved it! I am a Brazilian/American, and though I speak both languages fluently, when I speak with my friends, it's all mixed and meshed. No one understands us. :) haha We're just special like that. 

This is an amazing poem. Being a spanish speaker myself, i can really relate to this poem. It is alwasy an amazing, uplifting experiance when we find someone that shares our struggles, or our intrests, or our inspiratioin. Congrats on your creativity!

I love you, man. Ohmygosh. I'm just here like staring at the screen... And I also don't care how long ago this was, and how many times you've read comments just like mine, but you're amazing. 

It is good to see that you embrace your culture and use it as a weapon! Awesome.

this is literally one of the best things i've ever read, and that encompasses every styleof writing. you definitely deserved this.

Very profound, well written sir.

I like this a lot, it speaks volumes. It's always easier to express yourself through verse rather than spoken word.

Que cheverre! Y verdad, las palabras speak for themselves

Espero que te este llendo bien! Impresionante tu poema. Esa es la historia de muchos hipanos que estan lejos de su tierra! Suerte!

Thank you Harlyn, That was beautiful!